As she sleeps

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by Don'tBlaisMeBro (Folle et simple est la brebis qui au loup se confesse.) on Monday, 04-Oct-2004 15:21:10

I watch her, the sun casting a colorless glare off of the white walls, of the small house in which we reside, her hair falls lank against the pillow, as she lays there in that state between consciousness, and subdewed dreams.
The eyeswhich used to hold so much life, looked transparent now, how they once used to glow a radiant blue, and how they'd change in the light from violit, to a mysterious hazel color.

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I need more ideas! I can't think anymore.


To much schoolage.

Take care,

Post 2 by Goblin (I have proven to myself and the world that I need mental help) on Tuesday, 05-Oct-2004 10:42:06

its promising and rather like an artists pallet filled with colour

when the idea's come at 3am in my case smile.Be ready with the dictaphone because they are nearly always fleeting dont force them whatever you
good luck
Alex

Post 3 by Grace (I've now got the ggold prolific poster award! wahoo! well done to me!) on Tuesday, 05-Oct-2004 18:09:45

Hi Torico, Your writing reminds me of the Innocence of New Beginnings... When Life is dreamy and just at a point of taking on responsibilities and then "schoolage" as you say takes place and well, Life Dreams get lost in a fog as "reality" emerges and takes control.... Oh for that sweet dreamy simplier time in Life.... Connie remembering... ThankYou Torico for being you and causing a pleasant reAwakening to a past almost forgotten.... Sweet... CG

Post 4 by Siriusly Severus (The ESTJ 1w9 3w4 6w7 The Taskmaste) on Saturday, 09-Feb-2008 22:18:26

cool. maybe you could describe there love and how they love each other.